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Coming to terms

~ Scott W. Baker ~ 1 Comment

I just read a Clarion Update from Rochita and it helped me understand that I may not have been ready for Clarion West.

I don’t doubt that my writing is up to snuff for the workshop (I wouldn’t have been waitlisted if it weren’t).  What I may lack is a certain level of self-awareness.  What kind of fiction do I do best?  What do I enjoy writing about most?  What is it I bring to stories that no one else can?  I suspect that the workshop is supposed to help me find those answers, but it’s been a while since I even asked those questions.

The questions I’ve been asking recently have been “How can I make this story better?” or “How can I turn that into a story?” or even “Why can’t I finish this !@#$**! story?”  The answer to some of those questions may be to abandon them and try something else, something I need to write rather than want to write.  What stories are really mine to tell?  Ideas are cheap.  Any idiot can come up with an idea for a story.  I need to do a better job of finding the right idea for me.

I think that is what I’m supposed to be working on right now.  For instance, I think my military clone novel (Honor by Proxy) is a great idea and may be my best chance at selling a novel.  However, I am far from a military expert.  That doesn’t mean I can’t write the story, but it may mean I need a new direction.  While my YA space novel (untitled) will undoubtedly draw on my more immediate expertise as a close observer of children (teacher).  I don’t yet have my characters polished for that one, so it keeps skidding to a halt every time I try to work on it.

Am I well-suited for YA writing?  I don’t know.  I’ve sold two stories to youth-themed publications (“Faerie Belches” and “Brother Goo”).  Time will tell.

I need to reorganize my projects, set some deadlines, and bring order to my chaos.  (It can still be chaos, just scheduled and catalogued chaos.)  I have eight months (+/-) to raise my game and become part of the class of 2010.  Right now “Poison Inside the Walls” seems my strongest submission candidate (and likely my next WotF entry), though “Secondhand Rush” (my current WotF entry) seems a good second.  I might be able to use both.  But ideally I’ll create something between now and then that eclipses both.

A huge sigh of relief

~ Scott W. Baker ~ 1 Comment

After competing the square on my Kree story about a dozen times (math teacher humor that sadly even my students wouldn’t get), I have finally completed the first draft.  Yay me.

I rode a nice wave of inspiration for about 5500 words, good strong words I was very happy with.  Then I started to get into the sticky scientific parts and I ground to a halt.  After much forehead slapping, I finally backed up and changed the events of the climax.  Another dead end.  And another.  And another.

Originally the protagonist was supposed to make some grand discovery about theKree, the aliens they shared their moon with (not peacably).  That was going to end up being another 4000 words that diverged completely from the original plot.  Not a good thing.  So I tried a more warlike approach, squaring the protagonist off head-to-head with one of the Kree.  That technique didn’t work either.

I eventually discovered that the story really wasn’t about the Kree at all; that was why my climaxes kept falling flat.  (What would Freud say about that one?)  I needed the story to end the way it began, about people.

There is still a nice little Kree battle.  I need to set the story aside before making my editorial run at it.  There’s probably a lot to cut out, foreshadowing from the original ending and the like.  I know of at least one thing I need to add.  I’m saving it for editing.  This will end up my first submission to OWW, so I’ll have some crit-for-crit work to do to get people reading it.

I finally came up with a title: “Poison Inside the Walls”.  I like that it’s got multiple meanings in the story, but it just doesn’t seem as catchy as my normal titles (“Leech Run”, “Glow Baby”, “Thinking Out Loud”, “Decisions, Decisions!”).  Maybe I’m evolving past the catchy?  We’ll see.

-Oso

PS- I put Oso Baker in the byline.  It may come back out in editing.